"If theres one thng to learn,"
`thing

Simply written. I thought your flow and rhyme was pretty good.. your message was strong and in the end was remphasized and was put out there for the readers to see. Perfectly done. I saw nothing wrong with this. I loved your advice and thought process that went into this poem.

Good message.
5/5.

Good write...

"The others around me,
Have secrets to hide,
Not letting it loose,
Trying not to confide."

^^ I liked this stanza... very true...

one typo
If theres one thng to learn,
thng=thing

keep writing..