by Kaila Dec 9, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
The notes coincide with her rhythmic feet dancing circles in the flakes. |
Your free flowing words painted a picture in my mind of a beautiful ballerina scating in awesome scenery |
Wow, I'm honestly speechless! Reading your poem was like reading a romantic little story. You gave the reader a clear visual, and described every bit of action that was going on. I thoroughly enjoyed this and this has to be one of my favorites! So unique and orginal, I'm just at loss of words! Keep writing, you have such talent, always and forever. Have a Merry Christmas! |
by Gem
How can this have no comments!! |