Just you ( Double Etheree)

by Ingrid   Dec 9, 2008


You
Are all
I will need
in darker days
When life wears me down
then I will call on you
to hold me tight and kiss me
to chase my dark demons away
and slay my enemies with much force
Safe and secure I will feel in your arms
When life laughs at me I will need you too
to walk together along the shore
while the sun shines down upon us
and the wind plays with our hair
time will stand still for us
there will only be
just you and me
I love you
Always
Will

Etheree consists of 10 lines of 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10 syllables. Etheree can also be reversed and written 10, 9, 8, 7, 6, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1. Get creative and write an Etheree with more than one verse, but follow suit with an inverted syllable count.

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  • 8 years ago

    by PETER EDWARDS

    I liked this Ingrid. a poem cleverly done, and full to the brim of loving feelings, beautifully expressed.
    Good work here.

  • 15 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Very romantic love poem. 5/5