Life wreck

by Niky   Dec 9, 2008


Like a submarine wreck, my life sinks to the bottom
Deep blue sea, so dark and cold
Will I drown here all alone?

Like a plane wreck, my life is crashing down
Into the woods so gloomy and cold
Vanished in the dark, will I ever be found?

Like a train wreck my life breaks down into pieces
Inside this tunnel so murky and cold
Trapped inside will I ever get out?

Like a car wreck, my life wrecked into pieces
Laying on a highway feeling empty and cold
Can anybody hear me, or am I here all alone?

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  • 15 years ago

    by withlove

    I like it
    a couple changes that i would make
    but the idea behind it is really clever and the structure is great
    good job
    =)