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by Niky Dec 9, 2008 category : Life, society / other
Like a submarine wreck, my life sinks to the bottom Deep blue sea, so dark and cold Will I drown here all alone? Like a plane wreck, my life is crashing down Into the woods so gloomy and cold Vanished in the dark, will I ever be found? Like a train wreck my life breaks down into pieces Inside this tunnel so murky and cold Trapped inside will I ever get out? Like a car wreck, my life wrecked into pieces Laying on a highway feeling empty and cold Can anybody hear me, or am I here all alone?
by withlove
I like it a couple changes that i would make but the idea behind it is really clever and the structure is great good job =)