Tumbling Snowflakes. [Haiku]

by Courageous Dreamer   Dec 9, 2008


`*Written for a Haiku Contest.`*

Syllable count: 7,5,7.

Feathery snowflakes tumble
From wintry filled skies
Upon frigid tree branches

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  • 15 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Great imagery, congrats on winning first place! You really set the scene perfectly, and make me want it to be winter all year long..Beautiful work as always, short but so deep..5/5 from me..

  • 15 years ago

    by Vox

    Very nice choice of words and you kept the topic true to origional haiku form. I'd like to know why you swiched the true syllable count of 5, 7, 5 to the 7, 5, 7 count featured.

    very nice.

    5/5

    Vaughn

  • 15 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    The beauty of winter snow is so well described...

    "Feathery snowflakes tumble"

    ^^ beautiful...

    keep writing..

  • 15 years ago

    by Grace

    I love haikues!!! this is really beautiful =]

  • 15 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Very nice. Describes the scene outside my windows to a tee. Good job.

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