Comments : Tumbling Snowflakes. [Haiku]

  • 15 years ago

    by ghosts in bloom

    (: This is nice! The counts are perfect
    and the simple but beautiful picture really
    makes me dream of a white Christmas (;

    Nicely done Temps! Good choice
    of adjectives as well, reading it
    makes me shiverrrr.

  • 15 years ago

    by Crystal Rose Blooming

    A nice Haiku, very beautiful image comes to mind. Very nicely done .

  • 15 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Very nice. Describes the scene outside my windows to a tee. Good job.

  • 15 years ago

    by Grace

    I love haikues!!! this is really beautiful =]

  • 15 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    The beauty of winter snow is so well described...

    "Feathery snowflakes tumble"

    ^^ beautiful...

    keep writing..

  • 15 years ago

    by Vox

    Very nice choice of words and you kept the topic true to origional haiku form. I'd like to know why you swiched the true syllable count of 5, 7, 5 to the 7, 5, 7 count featured.

    very nice.

    5/5

    Vaughn

  • 15 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Great imagery, congrats on winning first place! You really set the scene perfectly, and make me want it to be winter all year long..Beautiful work as always, short but so deep..5/5 from me..