Monster Deep Inside

by Lauren   Dec 9, 2008


I'm looking in the mirror,
Who is that looking back?
That's not me at all,
I say that for a fact.

Something deep inside has changed,
It's eaten me away,
I'm dead to all my feelings,
It doesn't seem ok.

I've become completely soulless,
Something sucked it out,
I'm just an empty person,
Full of worthlessness and self doubt.

I want my old life back,
Those simple care free days,
Even then it was hellish,
But now I'm in an ignorant haze.

My mind is getting darker,
I can barely see the light,
This monster deep inside,
Is more then just a fright.

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  • 15 years ago

    by AngelicDecadence

    Last stanza "then" should be "than"

    I see this idea a lot, (ive done it myself lol) it's kind of gotten old, but this had a little spice into it i don't believe i've witnessed, perhaps the "monster" aspect of it? Hm.. Well, It's kinda flawless in its own way, I'd rather not pick it apart and destroy the emotion here. Great job on this.
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Kimberley

    Wow. love the last stanza. it just really appealed to me. 5/5. as usual you blew my away with the emotion in your words. amazing job. keep it up. ~KM~

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