Wow. love the last stanza. it just really appealed to me. 5/5. as usual you blew my away with the emotion in your words. amazing job. keep it up. ~KM~

Last stanza "then" should be "than"

I see this idea a lot, (ive done it myself lol) it's kind of gotten old, but this had a little spice into it i don't believe i've witnessed, perhaps the "monster" aspect of it? Hm.. Well, It's kinda flawless in its own way, I'd rather not pick it apart and destroy the emotion here. Great job on this.
5/5