Ok that was stranger but i've written stranger, HAHA. |
by Cara
Wow, ok. i dont usually read dark poems that much, but this one was quite good. |
by Paiger
Wow, you really paint quite the immagery in the readers mind, you really get us going, like a book you can't put down, you want to read it to the end. Great flow, nice use of vocabualry, always nice to not use the everyday words :) |
by SashaMirage
Wow you are excellent in the dark poem category. You really had me anticiapating how you would end it. The rhyming was good and the immagery was very vivid. I liked your use of vocabulary. 5/5 |