by themeuneverseen Dec 10, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
I'm addicted to your touch, as if it's a drug. |
WOW...Very beautiful kid. It's nice to see someone around here is in love. It is an amazing poem, but be careful with some of your spelling: "breathe" should be breath. But other than that.. amazing. Good job, keep it up! 5/5 |
by Prince LJ
This was a very good poem, i think anyone can relate to the message and emotion delivered. keep it up! :) |