What do i say to it, jesse...

5/5

Okay. Poem wise, this was fantasticly written. It was beautiful. The imagery was beyond great.

...the ending caught me off gaurd. -hugs you- If you need someone to talk to, I'm ish here.

The ending shocked me... well I was not expecting it to end this way... but I marvel at your imagery...

As for the fairy tales, the stories were different from what we are told... Disney modified it for childrens I guess ... and I love it that way :)

well described... well written...
keep writing..