One Beautiful Day

by xXxemzxXx   Dec 10, 2008


The sun was shining
It was a beautiful day
Little did i know
What would happen today

I used to look up to you
Till that very day
You raped me
There was little i could do or say

I wanted you dead
More than you could understand
Every night
The details of your death were planned

I couldnt stop the hate
It would continue to grow
It would build up inside of me
I never knew you could be so low

Three years later
Since the night you finally decided to leave
They say brothers are there to protect
I was so wrong i felt decieved.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Aish

    Wow-nice twist at the end.

    um i dont know what others would say but it was very blunt and confronting the way you expressed it so easily. but thats got nothing to do with your writing, just a personal opinion and very well the response you were seeking =P

    great job

    5/5

    aish
    xx

  • 15 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    What a sad poem...but beautiful not the less. i loved it. i added you to my favs. i really enjoy reading your stuff. Shanik

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