Wow, amazing write. 5/5

really like the title choice, it stands out and is strong.

the choice of wording to make the flow steady through out the poem really wordked, well done. i liked how each line flowed on its own and also made the stanza's flow together.

i was interested right from the start and you kept me reading until the end, although a very heart breaking poem it was very enjoyable to read.

keep writing xxx

I loved this poem it really descibes the essance of love and its imagery was perfect

there was one thing when you said She clung to this steady shoulders i think it should be his shoulders sorry if i am wrong but the rest was great

well done