Invincible

by shaun kelly   Dec 10, 2008


When we are together
i feel invincible
nothing can go wrong
i hope i can feel that forever

You brighten up my life
i could get lost in your eyes
you have the most gorgeous smile
And the best possible laugh

I sometimes have to stare
i cant believe how gorgeous you are
i just cant look away
i hate it when we arnt close

I suppose what im trying to say
Is i hope you feel this way
id feel a prick if it was just me
So what will it be?

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  • 15 years ago

    by shaun kelly

    Thank you very much for rating it and the comment i will be writing some new ones soon.

  • 15 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Very good poem. The wording was great. I liked the question you had at the end. The format was good. I gave it a 5/5.