"An evening blazed, joyful,
Gazing at the autumn crepuscule--"

Beautiful wording, the imagery is outstanding!

"Lavender and auburn a blend, the sky, fiery."

Great descriptions here, I can clearly see what the sky would look like in my mind, and you made it so beautiful..

"As the young wrens sang, cheerful.
The grass lay still, listening to the insects' murmurs--"

I like how know you write down the sounds, and how the grass is listening, very unique and creative thinking used here.

Overall, good job, this piece was short but so much to it. 5/5 from me, take care and always keep writing....