Very strong emotions. There was a couple spelling mistakes, and some explanations were a little ordinary. For example: “its raining cat's and dog's." It’s nicer when you get to see the writer’s personality. Because when you explain things, the reader gets to see how you see things. But if it’s the same old expressions everyone knows, they loose interest. Readers love originality and I don’t doubt that you lack it. Don’t be scared and just go crazy with it.

I can’t wait to read your next poem! Keep writing,

mandy :)