Divine (collab)

by Faithless   Dec 11, 2008


With thoughts of you racing through my mind
Separated by distance, yet with one thought intertwined
I can no longer hide my words behind
I want to know are our feelings aligned

So lovely so beautiful and so kind
Your romantic words always on my mind
I think of you be it rain or shine
I want to take your hand in mine

Bound to the wall of my country, confined
Will not stop our love from going beyond the line
For your name is upon my heart signed
Wherever you are, you'll be my holy shrine

You have my heart, to you its forever inclined
Every second I'm without you , you're words i rewind
Thoughts of you are better than love and lust combined
Wrapping around your heart endless entwine

Are you my soul mate that God assigned?
Are you the one i choose above all man kind?
Tell me shall i wait for more vital signs?
Or is this love just truly divine?

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  • 15 years ago

    by kate

    I really like this poem alot. it flowed very nicely when I was reading this it kinda reminded me in some parts of Romeo and Juliet how you honesty would go behind someone's back or even a "country" to get to the one you love. Its true, if your in love you'll try anything and everything in your power to have that one person around you.

    keep it up.
    keep on writing.
    love always and forever.

  • 15 years ago

    by Cara

    Wow this is my favourite from you also. I really liked the wording in it.. fantastic. It flowed really well and the love was easily felt in your words.
    Keep up the great work :)

  • 15 years ago

    by Jennifer

    This is very well writtin. great collab. i applaude your hard work!

  • 15 years ago

    by SashaMirage

    I loved writing this poem with you, it was so much fun. Our words really flow together. I feel like each phrase completes the last.

  • 15 years ago

    by kelleyana

    I really enjoy this poem. This is my favorite stanza
    "Are you my soul mate that God assigned?
    Are you the one i choose above all man kind?
    Tell me shall i wait for more vital signs?
    Or is this love just truly divine? "
    Azza, i can say yes i do believe this person is your soul mate because the love you expresses here is a an emotion that cames from the heart. In all your questions the answers are found within, just by reading between the lines. This is my favorite love poem of yours because it's one that is sincere and many can relates to. keep it up and continue writing with Sashmirage. You guys done real great job. It merits 5/5, kel

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