Comments : Divine (collab)

  • 15 years ago

    by kelleyana

    Or is this love just truly divine?
    Azza, i can say yes i do believe this person is your soul mate because the love you expresses here is a an emotion that cames from the heart. In all your questions the answers are found within, just by reading between the lines. This is my favorite love poem of yours because it's one that is sincere and many can relates to. keep it up and continue writing with Sashmirage. You guys done real great job. It merits 5/5, kel.

  • 15 years ago

    by kelleyana

    I really enjoy this poem. This is my favorite stanza
    "Are you my soul mate that God assigned?
    Are you the one i choose above all man kind?
    Tell me shall i wait for more vital signs?
    Or is this love just truly divine? "
    Azza, i can say yes i do believe this person is your soul mate because the love you expresses here is a an emotion that cames from the heart. In all your questions the answers are found within, just by reading between the lines. This is my favorite love poem of yours because it's one that is sincere and many can relates to. keep it up and continue writing with Sashmirage. You guys done real great job. It merits 5/5, kel

  • 15 years ago

    by SashaMirage

    I loved writing this poem with you, it was so much fun. Our words really flow together. I feel like each phrase completes the last.

  • 15 years ago

    by Jennifer

    This is very well writtin. great collab. i applaude your hard work!

  • 15 years ago

    by Cara

    Wow this is my favourite from you also. I really liked the wording in it.. fantastic. It flowed really well and the love was easily felt in your words.
    Keep up the great work :)

  • 15 years ago

    by kate

    I really like this poem alot. it flowed very nicely when I was reading this it kinda reminded me in some parts of Romeo and Juliet how you honesty would go behind someone's back or even a "country" to get to the one you love. Its true, if your in love you'll try anything and everything in your power to have that one person around you.

    keep it up.
    keep on writing.
    love always and forever.