Deeper darkness

by coverd in darkness   Dec 11, 2008


Deeper the darkness takes me,
Taking me to a place with no light,
For there will be no one,
There will be nothing,
Just a dark place with nothing more,
There will no longer be light as a guide,
Every thing pitch black,
There will come the day where i will fall.

Deeper and deeper into the darkness,
All my thoughts illuminate,
All the life becomes one giant blur,
The life i once had all but gone,
Covered by the darkness of now,
Not one single bit of light to be found,
Faster and faster i fall to the ground.

Deeper into the darkness no return this time,
For this time it will take me,
Not just for now but for good,
For i can't hold the strength no more,
For it's a fight not worth fighting for,
As a life with so much darkness,
Isn't a life worth living for,
Deeper and deeper into the darkness,
Now it takes me goodbye.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Really nice job. I liked your style. Keep it up. Shanik

  • 15 years ago

    by H E Losey

    Second line "n"??? "no" ?
    Second stanza, line five "the" between "by" and "darkness"
    Again a style I am not comfortable commenting on.