Life is Dreaded From The Heart

by Daisy   Dec 11, 2008


As her mother screamed and cried,
Her sick little child just sighed,
Her mother said, 'Do not go!',
But her little child sighed 'no..'
She looked at her mother, a tear on her eye....
The little child blew her last breath,
And used it to say, 'Goodbye.................'

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  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Wow, this is so wonderfully powerful. i like short poems that just hit you really hard.

    well done on this! xx

  • 16 years ago

    by TheRevelation

    This is such a beautiful and touching poem, congrats and you have much talent. Short and to the point, but it had the exact effect that it should. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by She Is My Rain

    Wow..that was really good. Really emotional. I loved it. Keep up the great work =]

  • 16 years ago

    by Marcus blake

    "The little child blew her last breath,
    And used it to say, 'Goodbye.................'"

    good stuff thats emotional stuff life is really more tragic than it seems.

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    There was a sweetness to it but at the same time it was very sad. Nice wording and flow. It was a short poem but that didn't bother me any. I gave it a 5/5.

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