Comments : Cutting...an end

  • 16 years ago

    by Hollywood

    Omg im so sorry i hope this is just what you felt and not so true well ither way you felt it omg this rouched me i love poems like this and i have no good reason why but i absolulty loved it!

  • 16 years ago

    by Cara

    Wow, this was truely amazing. I am so glad that you woke up that one morning.. and realized that you did deserve to live.. and ther was something to live for.. because you are sure to go far with your life :]
    First stanza was one of my favourites, although just one thing:

    I can see the tears running from your eyes
    I can the bloody knife sitting in your hand

    ^^ I can see the bloody knife sitting in your hand.

    This was also a fantastic stanza:

    But you continue cutting your arms
    The blood is starting to drip to the floor
    Please know that you are hurting me
    I don't know if I can take much more

    ^^ true talent in these words :]

    I really loved how you wrote about your pain.. but you also incorporated into the poem, that you made it through.. that there is hope. I think that is very inspirational to anyone feeling down and out. i think thats fantastic and im sure it will give hope to the hopeless.

    Great write.
    5/5