I like this piece a lot...
Very intelligent and effective poem. You managed to say so much within three short stanzas, which is truly powerful. I like your choice of words along with the topic that you wrote about.

I missed your lovely pieces.

- Promising horizon beckons
to demark niche of its own
Feathers edging to sway
Unflinching, soaring away-
^^^
My favorite stanza, truly greatly written.

A brilliant and unique poem.

Keep up!

5/5. This was so fresh and new. The imagery with the use of "tangerine" and "golden sunbeams" in the first stanza was great; your lines were short without any unnecessary words to dilute the meaning; and "unflinching" was a very well-chosen adjective. Nice job on this one!

This poem is beatifully written with gret imagery and reflects the talent of the author

I really enjoyed this poem. I do find however, as I do in almost every poem, you need more punctuation (or less in some cases). I know a lot of people don't like punctuation in poetry, which I do understand. But, punctuation is the ONLY thing in a poem that has to be essay like. And, the reason of that is when you read an essay you pause at punctuation marks, they're known as end points and such. You need that in poetry too. It's what (usually) gives the emphasis to drama and lingering feelings the oomph they need, along with helping the flow to be perfect. It's just needed.

Other than that, a wonderful poem.

Indeed an impecable write!
whow, what a beauty, no fillers anywhere just pure poetry!
Bravo, girl!

Hugs,

5/5 Ingrid

Im lost for words, you just....caught me offguard... your words injected into me captured in whole, flowing along in simmering to boil, peaked perfectly, well done sincerely, great effort inner. *claps*

Another very nice write. I think you missed the rhyme lines 9&10 and the metre is off. Remember metre is what makes our words poetry rather then prose.