by Beauty In The Breaking Dec 11, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
I close my eyes and try to rest, |
by Erion
Excellent poem! |
by kaylajoyx3
I really enjoyed reading this poem. I liked how you said at the last lines that he's always with you in your dreams. I can relate. It always feels like he's forever in your heart but never quite in reality. I liked how your emotions came together to form this piece. Great job - Kayla |
by SaRaH K
Wow. I really enjoyed reading this poem. My fiancee is halfway across the country, in the air force, and I don't know how many times the only thing that has gotten me through has been the time I've spent with him in my dreams. Very nicely done |