Wow. I really enjoyed reading this poem. My fiancee is halfway across the country, in the air force, and I don't know how many times the only thing that has gotten me through has been the time I've spent with him in my dreams. Very nicely done

I really enjoyed reading this poem. I liked how you said at the last lines that he's always with you in your dreams. I can relate. It always feels like he's forever in your heart but never quite in reality. I liked how your emotions came together to form this piece. Great job - Kayla

Excellent poem!