A very beautiful love poem. Seamless writing, cannot tell who wrote which verse. Excellent.

This is a wonderful piece of work tha has been written, thank you for sharing it with us.

Sadaddy

Wow, this poem was amazing. I once heard that When inlove you can write the most magical poems, and this proves it. I can't tell which lines are your's and which are Karans. It was very beautiful and romantic, keep writing together. 5/5

This is a beautiful piece of poem.... wow.. amazing 5/5
i like it from the start till the end..
another great poem from u. thanks for writing ;)

Lovely indeed...It was beautiful, sweet amazing & romantic...the both of you have created a wonderful masterpiece

Excellent job u guys;)
5/5 from me

Wow !! An amazing poem stuffed with love !!
It is truely an enjoyable read, I read it more than twice and each time discovered new meanings for yours words. You have done a great job by adding the touch of nature to your poem, for nature and love are consistent and complementary. It is obvious that each word is coming from the heart, great work both you. Keep it up !!

I love the words you chose! Your doing a great job! I love it! (:

Very nice poem

How very beautiful:)
You made such a tender and meaningful poem together, indeed seemless and written by one hand so it seems:)

Much luck and love to you both:)

5/5 Ingrid