Very good poem. I can relate but my bf is only states away. I gave it a 5/5.

I loved these two lines:
"As they venture deeper into the unknown
unknowingly aware of what they have start."
'Unknowingly aware' - I love that phrase. Wonderful poem. Emotion was evident. 5/5

Hi Azzza,

This poem looks really smooth, I love what you have made!
The last stanza was my favorite:)

Hugs,

5/5 Ingrid

This poem was filled with romance Every line was hypnotizing and charming. It was very beautiful. I love this line:
"As the plane awaits to take flight
never have they felt so right"

Awesome write. Really relates to many people and i loved it.

unknowingly aware of what they've have start
^^^^
You have they've which stands for they have.. and then you have, have afterwards as well? maybe just change that.

But apart from that, great love poem :)

(: I relate. I'm in Asia... he's in the US

(: I relate. I'm in Asia... he's in the US

All of your poems are great, amazing,awesome, powerful etc...
But this one I have to say is P E R F E C T
it's about a far love in a diff zone times, I got ya... A love that is explained in a pure perfect way... You have the most wonderful poems that i've ever read in my life...
5/5