Wow, there's some really deep emotion in this poem. It is quite short, but I think that is great, as the reader recieves one small but concentrated dose of emotion, which makes this poem very effective.

I really like the repitition of the first stanza, like it was an introduction the first time, then it is explained, and then it is used at the end again so the reader goes "Oh I understand now". I love it when poems do that ^.^

Now onto the content... The slight rhymes were effective and seemed effortless, intended or otherwise. In the third stanza, the emotion is so strong and raw you want to reach into the poem and give the author a hug :) Excellent work, well done.

I'm going to give this a five, as there is nothing to be improved and it touched me :)

Keep writing,
Emily :)