by Josh Dec 11, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
I do my best to make you happy |
by SheenaMarie
Great write 5/5 |
by XxLastHopexX
I can definitly see the venting in this. The emotion is there. Next time when you try venting write it just like you did. Then start picking at it. Make it flow more. Throw all you attention and emotion into it. Then it will have more flow and be passionate. THink of the ocfean if that makes any sense at all. That what you you want you poems to be like. deep....beautiful...flowing.....hard to ignore. |
by Em
Many of us have been in this situation, 5/5. Em |
Ouch... |
by ibelievedhim
I already said this, but since my computer stopped being dumb, i think it is beautiful :) |