I already said this, but since my computer stopped being dumb, i think it is beautiful :)

Ouch...
been there, felt that...
nice venting tho :)

Many of us have been in this situation, 5/5. Em

I can definitly see the venting in this. The emotion is there. Next time when you try venting write it just like you did. Then start picking at it. Make it flow more. Throw all you attention and emotion into it. Then it will have more flow and be passionate. THink of the ocfean if that makes any sense at all. That what you you want you poems to be like. deep....beautiful...flowing.....hard to ignore.

It was well written..but it just a tip...I try to use it myself.

Great write 5/5