by heartbrokengrl Dec 12, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
-I know this most likely a poem but i don't care. This was supposed to be poem when i can i will make it one, but for know I need to put this up and get it off my chest so that i can feel better |
This is well done. Lots of thought and shows true emotion. 5/5 |
I really enjoy this one...I can relate to it a lot. Lots of feelings in this one, keep it up =3 |
by Faithless
Awww another sad write from you.I guess sometimes love can be cruel if you are not in control of it. Hearts broken after it's been broken. Well i hope this would be the last time that your heart is broken. Learn from life's past lesson. I really enjoy the write. |
I really had no trouble picking up the flow of this poem |
This is sad. i know what its like to be told they love you but prove something the opposite.. jus think that you deserve better and keep your head up. give this some work and it would be a great poem. |