What you did

by heartbrokengrl   Dec 12, 2008


-I know this most likely a poem but i don't care. This was supposed to be poem when i can i will make it one, but for know I need to put this up and get it off my chest so that i can feel better

You fell in love with me
I eventually fell in love with you
But after i did your love for me disappeared overnight

I feel like it was my fault this happened and i still do
You promised me that we would be friends forever
No matter what life put us through

You said you would never ignore me
As other guys had before
I guess that was easier said than done

Because your breaking those promises
The same way you broke my heart
But you didn't break my heart you shattered it

All because you told me so many times that you truly loved me
And that no mater what happened you always would
And i believed you

But everything you said to me was a lie
I realize that now
But now it's too late

I want to hate you but i can't
I want to forget you but thats impossible

Now I have to see you with her
And know that you really like her

At least you will be happy
But I have to live without you
and it's unbelievably hard to bear.

Plz commet i want to know what you think

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  • 15 years ago

    by Littlewriter-a

    This is well done. Lots of thought and shows true emotion. 5/5
    -Arielle

  • 15 years ago

    by HeavenlyxDivine

    I really enjoy this one...I can relate to it a lot. Lots of feelings in this one, keep it up =3

  • 15 years ago

    by Faithless

    Awww another sad write from you.I guess sometimes love can be cruel if you are not in control of it. Hearts broken after it's been broken. Well i hope this would be the last time that your heart is broken. Learn from life's past lesson. I really enjoy the write.

    Excellent Job
    5/5 from me

  • 15 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    I really had no trouble picking up the flow of this poem

    This poem reflects on the mischief of Eros
    The last time I though I has truly in love
    I also related to the song tell me lies tell me sweet little lies
    There are few pains greater than rejection and I hope you keep writing

  • 15 years ago

    by crystaljean88

    This is sad. i know what its like to be told they love you but prove something the opposite.. jus think that you deserve better and keep your head up. give this some work and it would be a great poem.