Hey its nice to find someone who i can relate to =]. i love the way you vented your feelings here. i think once you get a chance to gather them all together a great poem can evolve =].

This is a good poem. i like it.

I really like how you are able to describe
your feelings..keep it up!! :)

This is sad. i know what its like to be told they love you but prove something the opposite.. jus think that you deserve better and keep your head up. give this some work and it would be a great poem.

I really had no trouble picking up the flow of this poem

This poem reflects on the mischief of Eros
The last time I though I has truly in love
I also related to the song tell me lies tell me sweet little lies
There are few pains greater than rejection and I hope you keep writing

Awww another sad write from you.I guess sometimes love can be cruel if you are not in control of it. Hearts broken after it's been broken. Well i hope this would be the last time that your heart is broken. Learn from life's past lesson. I really enjoy the write.

Excellent Job
5/5 from me

I really enjoy this one...I can relate to it a lot. Lots of feelings in this one, keep it up =3

This is well done. Lots of thought and shows true emotion. 5/5
-Arielle