Another wonderful write of yours ... the imgary and the metaphors used to describe your emotions is beautiful...

"Seamless windows of guilt
Built into walls of soul
Doors of opportunity nailed shut
Hope screams for freedom"

^^ I love the metaphors used here...

"Believe
Like the girl I see
Behind your chestnut eyes
Prays you will
Before death finds you "
^^ I felt both sadness and encouragement in these lines ... wonderful ending..

keep writing..