by Maddy Dec 12, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Girl and guy, hand in hand, |
by oddi tea
Oh my gosh. An amazing poem though really really depressing. I have felt this, or thought so at least. Great writing, amazing imagery, more amazing story. I could just see it popping out of my head and flashing beneath my eyelids. Perfect. 5/5 |
by Cara
Wow, this sure was intense. It was so descriptive! Awesome job. You described the stages that the girl went through very well.. the first one being, of course with the guy, and then the, finding out she was pregnant, then it was the denial, then it was the beatings, then the embarrassment.. then finally.. the death. It kept me reading right till the end and i was interested the whole way through. It was incredibly sad, but you wrote about an issue that is commonly faced in todays society, extremely well. |
by Ingrid
Tragic and really well written too. |
by TakenSoul
This is amazing and it really is sad to think that some people really do deal with their problems in a way like that but my cousins girlfriend tried to kill of their first kid with drugs and drinking but luckily he turned out ok |
by Baby Rainbow
Wow, that was really eye opening. i thought you did a great job on this. |