Comments : Is there love?

  • 15 years ago

    by pozinthenoise

    "I thought cupid was supposed to find me the perfect girl
    But he has seemed to have fallen right to the ground
    What happened to this angel that was supposed to be mine
    I guess she is another love that is not around "

    These are very powerful lines...

    Waiting for a love that is yet to come....

    5/5

    =)

  • 15 years ago

    by Prince LJ

    Rather depressing, but real at the same time

    good job my friend :)

  • 15 years ago

    by Cara

    Wow.. how sad.. i loved how you spoke about cutting yourself off from love, so that you dont feel the hurt and the pain that often comes with it.
    overall a great poem, just one small thing i noticed..

    Wishing that this lonliness would one day be done
    ^^
    Loneliness i think it should be.

    Your poem really made me think.. so awesome job :]
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by SashaMirage

    That was so sad and yet so romantic at the same time. You expressed how you feel in a very beautiful way.

    Walking down the road of my life
    I begin seeing all the broken pieces of my heart
    Is there really such a thing as true love
    Or am I supposed to keep getting torn apart...
    (these lines were my favorite because so many people can relate and it was a great way to start you poem and draw people into reading it) 5/5