Comments : December

  • 16 years ago

    by pozinthenoise

    Wow, this is a magnificent poem....

    You reminded me why I hate Decembers, it really captured my attention and my reasons....

    Keep writing...5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Jennifer

    Very very good. i can relate to this poem. instead of being three years for me its about four. 5/5 well done

  • 15 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    Wow I did.nd expect that last part you are
    a excellent writer I see greatest in your word choice stick with your poetry you have
    talent I dont usually read love poems but
    I will def.. read yours. I just know from
    reading this one i will enjoy all of your poems

  • 13 years ago

    by BlueJay

    I don't think you know how I miss,
    Those lovely happy days,
    Even tough it's been three years,
    I still feel like it's been yesterday.
    ^^ Is the most plain stanza in this piece, yet it is what speaks to me the most. Though I would change been in the third line of it to was, otherwise it doesn't sound right.

    You have described the scene so wonderfully and you really did a nice job of adding emotion in with the details. Your choice of words could have been better, but I do think this was still a nice choice. your flow is missing in some places, but it still is okay. I can't say this is truly worthy of a 5/5 but I was thinking more along the lines of a 4. Good job and please do continue