LOL! CJ, I have this feeling you are in love, my dear friend!
May the Gods be with you and bless this relationship:)

Much love for you and your girl;)

5/5 Ingrid

The way u describe this gal makes me wanna get to know her lol

but a few pointer

1)She has a sweet cheeks and eyes
-i think it sounds better without the 'a'
2)And steel you heart as well as your car
- i think u meant to say steal instead of steel?

Well apart from that, i abosolutely love this poem , it has a vey nice rythm and flow

Excellent job
5/5 from me