by isabel Dec 13, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
Every morning I struggle to open my eyes |
Everything about the poem was just filled with emotion.. every line well written.. |
"Every morning I struggle to open my eyes |
by Minkus
5/5. I really enjoyed the butterfly and universe metaphors and your rhythm was above average. The only suggestion I have would be to change the "A sweet star, shining so bright" to "One sweet star, shining so bright". Great job! |
by Bugg
Every morning I struggle to open my eyes |
This brought a tear to my eye. Made me remember when my ex and I were in love. It's beautiful, honestly - I don't care if you don't comment on my poetry, I just gotta say this was more than amazing. Good job kid. |