by Grandpoet Dec 13, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Twas only yesterday, |
by Monica93
I liked it. I like the type of writing that you used. but i agree with sepertating the stanzas just to make it a little easier to break apart. But other than that i really do like it. It sorta reminds me of a version of Romeo and Juliet in a way!! 5/5 |
by Mister 47
Ok i read it and the flow is jsut amaizing , but a few pointers , |