by Anthony Duvalle Dec 13, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
It's a terrifying sound when you can't fill your lungs |
Wow.................. |
Omg this is a very good poem...i really liked reading it.. please continue with the good work...looking forward to reading more of your creativity. |
by Steven Topaz
This was a flawless unique poem, and the only thing i didnt like about it is the title, a good title but it doesnt tie into the poem, other than that, i dont know how someone gave you a 4. |
by SashaMirage
Wow that the emotion you put into this was very strong. Your words painted a vivid picture in my mind. The way you ended it was my favorite part. 5/5 |
This piece of work, expressed alot of emotions, and sent chills throughout my body 5/5 |