Aww... so sad. i love it but its still so sad. amazing write, i really felt how you did i think. 5/5. amazing. ~KM~

Omg 5/5...so sad.I know how you feel sooo much.Amazing writing..Keep up the work

Aww this was very sad but i really liked this! This was and amazing write!

The title of this poem is very clever, in all its a simple little poem, with deep meaning i loved it although its incredibly sad, i loved the repetittion in the last line it shows the emotion in which the girl must have felt to do that. ia also loved the simple lanuage in which you used in this poem, and it was beautifully wrote keep it up xx

This poem is short but expressive. nice work

I liked it
and i dont normly like rhymes
but you got me in this one.
good job

Wow your word are truly captivating. I can feel the emotions felt by the protagoinst in the poem.The choice of words that you used enables me to depicts the tragic events.

Excellent Job
5/5 from me

Woah that made my heart stop for a moment. Incredible. 5/5

I love the shortness to this poem because that is all it needed. The title brings in readers and the last two lines really hit me. Congrats! 5/5

Love hurts when it takes your heart away and breaks it, but ask yourself if its this one love you live for what about the others on earth you love, family friends, they are the ones who count, who live for yOu, even someone who you dont realise. But I believe without love at all on any level or enjoyment, it is not life, its just breathing. find that life you need so you can breathe and live YOUR life, nobody else breathes for you. 5/5 for such sound honesty, penned vividly

This piece of work, expressed alot of emotions, and sent chills throughout my body 5/5

Wow that the emotion you put into this was very strong. Your words painted a vivid picture in my mind. The way you ended it was my favorite part. 5/5

This was a flawless unique poem, and the only thing i didnt like about it is the title, a good title but it doesnt tie into the poem, other than that, i dont know how someone gave you a 4.

Omg this is a very good poem...i really liked reading it.. please continue with the good work...looking forward to reading more of your creativity.

Wow..................