Comments : Why?

  • 15 years ago

    by CanUKissAwayMyPain

    Just tell me why
    Why you can't look me in the eyes
    & admit what you did
    Instead of keeping everything hid
    I just want the truth

    ^for some poeple it trulie hard to tell the truth. it's simple for others n difficutly to others. we just hope they're say in is true. n trusting them. the flow was nice. a strong way of openin your pieces. in my mind sounded like your were yellin for sum reason.

    I believed in you with all I had
    Now I'm pissed off and mad
    At me & at you
    Not knowing what to do
    Who's fault is this really

    ^powerfule words indeed here. i like it. i wouldnt change a word or thing here.

    Mine for trusting you
    Or yours for the things you do
    Every time I call
    You don't answer, another tear falls
    With out you I see myself so differently

    ^awww.. trulie sad. i like how u ended with a emotion strong and sading. nicely done

    TaKe CaRe,
    Frenchy

  • 15 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This is a rare love poem that seems to have contained in it a desire to be honest. I like the style but the main reason I believe it deserves a five is the pouring out of true feelings in an eloquent poem.