Waiting For My Smile.

by Courageous Dreamer   Dec 14, 2008


Actual Title:
Waiting For My Smile [Even if that means waiting forever.]

*`Written for a phrase contest.`*
Using the phrase:
`Sometimes you need the one that makes you smile, even if it means waiting.`

Glancing at his picture in her hands, she silently whispers "I love you."
His addictive eyes instantly trigger desires she can't possibly ignore,
as a smile swiftly looms on her flushed face inflicting happiness.
Butterflies scatter freely floating in mid air, caressing her soul.

A pure love shared continues to blossom, despite the enduring distance.
Both eagerly await that day their dreams transition to reality.
Willing to do whatever it takes, never giving up, and realizing that..
Sometimes you just need the one that makes you smile, even if it means waiting.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Very true and wise words, an overall very meaningful piece that really gave out the message loud and clear. It does (like Mysterious Charmer said) remind me of the quote "good things come to those who wait", and your words are so poweful and heartfelt. Nice work, 5/5 from me, keep it up..

  • 15 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Very well written and these two lines really express it all.

    "Willing to do whatever it takes, never giving up, and realizing that..
    Sometimes you just need the one that makes you smile, even if it means waiting." Good job. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Crystal Rose Blooming

    Very nice and sweet write. You did a good job with this. It's not always easy to write from a title someone else made up

    well done

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