Comments : Waiting For My Smile.

  • 15 years ago

    by Crystal Rose Blooming

    Very nice and sweet write. You did a good job with this. It's not always easy to write from a title someone else made up

    well done

  • 15 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Very well written and these two lines really express it all.

    "Willing to do whatever it takes, never giving up, and realizing that..
    Sometimes you just need the one that makes you smile, even if it means waiting." Good job. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Very true and wise words, an overall very meaningful piece that really gave out the message loud and clear. It does (like Mysterious Charmer said) remind me of the quote "good things come to those who wait", and your words are so poweful and heartfelt. Nice work, 5/5 from me, keep it up..