Hmmm... I think we can learn a lot when we look to nature. It's also a good way to portray feelings that can't be described in any other way. The best way to descibe this poem, I think, is that you used "pretty" words. Good job.

Good use of language, large vocabulary

Good use of language, large vocabulary

Nice poem Daisy, free spirits always make me happy...xp

Your words are the ocean.
So vast and so deep.

Sorry, got caught up in your rhythm...

Great job.