Window to my heart (Tanka)

by Ingrid   Dec 14, 2008


Billowing curtains
soft summer breeze gives them wings
Window to my heart
wide open, waiting for him
Howling to a crescent moon

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  • 8 years ago

    by PETER EDWARDS

    As always Ingrid, great imagery in very few words!
    I love every line that you have written.
    Well penned!

  • 13 years ago

    by Milo

    A beautiful short poem. Its simplicity speaks volumes of emotions untold. Thank you

  • 15 years ago

    by Faithless

    I love your imagination Ingrid. I can truly envision the protagonist in the poem ligering by the window waiting for her love. A wonderful write;)

    Excellent Job
    5/5 from me

  • 15 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Excellent as usual. The images are vivid. Good job. 5/5