Comments : Everyday

  • 15 years ago

    by SashaMirage

    "Why does my heart for your every word obey"
    "When all my friends left you were the one to stay"
    "I'm in way to deep, now I can't turn away"
    "I promise you forever, every day.
    I love that poem it was so romantic and full of meaning. I am addicted to every word.

  • 15 years ago

    by kelleyana

    This is so beatiful and i'm sure Sasha is flattered by those breathtaking words of yours. Azzza, you'd a kind heart and i'm greatful to have you as a friend .Keep on writing these great poems my friend. It merits 5/5, kel.

  • 15 years ago

    by SweetGrief

    Hey!!! this is a very fabulous poem... the way you described this person and on the another hand the way you feel when you talk to this person! I liked the questions that you ask in the end of the poem... keep it up buddi ^^

  • 15 years ago

    by SweetGrief

    WOW!!!! honestly! u have made my day !!! I love it love it love it... I could really feel the love you put in this poem... and the way you described that person amazed me.

    Is it normal for me to feel this way?
    lying on my bed and staring into space
    daydreaming of you everyday
    wondering what you would say?

    I really loved this part, cause in this part you have totally described a person who is in overdose love...

    Hey btw, I guess that your poems actually heal depression ^^ Keep it up buddi!