by Curing the Comon Cliche Dec 14, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Do you look in the mirror |
by Brittany C
I really liked this poem and enjoyed reading it. I liked the last 3 stanzas more then the rest of the poem though. Nicely worded. The flow did seem to be off in places. But was better in the last 3 stanzas. |
This poem really got to me bro. 5/5 |
by Enigma
'How ever do you feel' is pretty much the same as 'How do you feel', just more formal. Or am I wrong in this case? |
by Baby Rainbow
Excellent poem, well done. xx |
by StandStill
Do you look in the mirror |