The only way

by Baby Rainbow   Dec 14, 2008


The only way that i would talk
was with a dog out on a walk
the only way that i would smile
was cuddling with a dog a while
the only way to cure my pain
was being with a dog again
the only way i felt safe inside
was having a dog and we could hide
the only way i had control
is now the thing that you have stole
the only way i can forgive
is for me to no longer be here to live

saffie
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  • 15 years ago

    by mandy

    Very well written. A lot of diffrent ideas in this poem, all of them are good. Great emotions, great write, 5/5.

    -mandy :)

  • 15 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    The pain in this poem is clear. Again this one has a fast pace and the emotion rises until it reaches a climatic conclusion and that is sadly the contemplation of suicde - so sad, but a feeling I can relate to having been there myself.

    Take care

    Michael x

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