by Baby Rainbow Dec 14, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Just when things were going right |
by Ingrid
HA! Oh, this poem made me feel so good. |
by Mr. Darcy
The flow in this poem is pretty good through out and the rhyme too. It is fast paced and the words breathe a venomous warning to it, something like..if you play with fire, you're gonna get burnt buster!! |
I love this one! its really good. you have alot of talent, the emotion in it is amazing. |
by Saving Grace
This was just WOW. You’ve put a hell of a lot of emotion into this which is very clear. Each line carried on to the next so well, with an excellent rhyme scheme which penned together amazingly. Excellent work. 5/5 xx |
by Raychil
This poem was magnificent. I loved the flow and the rhythm, it was amazing. Your rhyme scheme made it more powerful, something we can all feel is the pain when we fight with someone we care about and know deep down what they're doing is wrong. This poem shows that you are smart though and strong. Keep your chin up and keep writing. Don't let anyone tear you down. |