I like the first stanza... explains how i feel a lot!!!
great! :)

Alot of hate, ok. I like the last phase, very good.

Umm... this was kinda wow.
in a good way... It really tells people that you are mad.
and that you know it doesnt do anything or get you anywhere but you're mad just the same.
5outa5 good job.
**bri

This reminds me of a song, Mad Belongs Where? and I don't remember who its by, but it is a nice piece of emotion and only a little structure. But all the same it is quite good.